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Tuesday 7 March 2017

The port hills

we had to wright a story about a fire on the port hills.

BY Milla hope you enjoy Thanks watching!
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5 comments:

  1. Anonymous9 March 2017 at 10:02

    hi milla its kirsty its good but you need more slids

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  2. Miss Morgan14 March 2017 at 10:55

    Hey Milla Miss M here, what a good first effort at a slide. You have understood how to make it fit well done. I enjoyed your story and am glad that you are okay, what a terrible thing to happen. Next time it would be good to use a font that has lower case letters not just capitals.

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  3. Anonymous18 March 2017 at 11:05

    kristy (millas mum)
    just want to say good work for trying your best ....keep trying hard .
    lotsa love xo

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  4. Chloe Johnstone18 March 2017 at 16:03

    Hi Milla, what an awesome way to display your story. You worked so hard on this in class, well done. I wonder if you could add some full stops to make it easier for the reader.

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  5. Anonymous22 March 2017 at 20:37

    oh sorry i will next time done bye Milla.

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