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Friday 30 June 2017

journey!!!!!!!!!!!

Hey guys, whats up I have been doing a journey slide and writing hope you enjoy : )
                                                                writing
“Hi I am rose I have a best friend with me and that is mine she is crazy .she loves dragons I do to she was going to bring one on board but i told mine it was okey to take her pet but there was too much pets on the ship so I told her just one okey let's go to mars wait OH NO!!!!!” “Whats going on mine?” “MY POTION MY POTION WENT OUT THE WINDOW” “oh my mine you can make more Right?” “NO I CAN'T WAAAAAAAAA” “it's ok mine 1 hour later!!!!!!”“ARE WE HERE YET???” “No mine 2 more hours to go” “WHAT!!!!” “I know its ok you can play Minecraft” “YAAAAAAY!!!!!!!!” So she did. “It's been 1 hour you need to get off that now mine” “NOOOOOOO!!!” “Oh okey heres some water” “OHHHHHHHHHHHHH NOOOOO”” what?” “The water went on the ps4” “WHAT!!!!!! OH MY NO WAY!!!!!” “I am NEVER taking you to space what i'm sorry rose just joke you're all ways come you make it fun” “OH look we're here!!!!!!!!!”“YAAAAY!!!” “We're here okay let's go out the door yes were here it is dry rose”  “I know what's that “”UHHHHHHHHH!!!! A MONSTER Uhhhhhh” “get your sword out ok then i killed them all wait what's is that it's red” “I don't no you can go have a look oh ok wait where did she go i gotta find rose ok let's go oh my is that her phone I got to try call someone to help oh no there's no Signal” “wait what's that Sound “”AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!” “It's a ghost wait WHERE'S ROSE TELL!!!!” “ME no i will not tell you” “YES YOU” “WILL bye bye WAIT ok I need to find her oh look there's a boat ok i got to go on it and find her oh look there's a Magic stick, it may get rose back ok i'm going to try it rose your back you're back where's my phone oh i left it why did you not get it i I forgot I'm really sorry next time I promise I'll bring it when you get lost ok let's go back” “and get it the phone okay then let's go okay we're back but where is my phone I had it I did there's no way it can just go like that?” “Now what am I going to do it may be in the boat oh ya lets go wait the boat is not there “Wait were HOME” “yes yes yes I'M SO HAPPY WE'RE home!!!!!!” “I no let's go see are dragons now that never really did help us ya i no it did i don't want to go to mars now let's go to Jupiter next” “ya I hope there are no monsters there me too  AHHHHHH!!!” “There's a that bad dog AHHHHHH!!! Ok we're in are playhouse's it can't come up okay my dragons on my nooo!!!! crys”“Look there's your dragon look yaaay and there're mum and dad yay” the END!!!!! and now lets look at my slide

1 comment:

  1. wow good job milla it is a lot of writing I got lost cos theta is a lot of i like haw you youst minecraft people

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