Thursday 15 March 2018
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Hi I am Jordyn from Karoro School and like that you introduced your self through a slide presentation and I can tall your personality by the way you have put in the little things that move and the little pictures.
ReplyDeleteHi milla it's Chrysler here I think you are doing really good it is good to see that you care about your friends maybe you can post a blog post this month k.
ReplyDeleteHi milla its Jesse here maybe you should name it something else and do some writing like and the end you could do this bey bloggers hope you enjoyed my slide. Blog you later!!! like that and maybe do some more slides and writing. blog you later!!!
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Milla, This is good but you might need to write an introduction for your post. I think this is great, Maybe you should do some punctuation like , . Because people who read it (like me) might need a breath you could just add a comma ( , ) Anyway that is good. Bye blog you later
ReplyDeletekoa it is Angus. I enjoyed the part when you put funny pictures and they are also cute. did you know that you should not of blog this because this is not part of our leaning. To improve you could do an different font because the I looks like a g BLOG YOU LATTER!!!!!
ReplyDeleteit looks like you burt the cat
ReplyDeleteHello i'm kirsty as you may know me from being friends. I liked the part when you shared it all about you it was really nice. You bought me back to when we had the play that time, that was super fun. Home come you did this blog? To improve you can put the font a little bit bigger. Anyway I have to go do one more comment, bye
ReplyDeleteHi this is Stephanie and I really like your blog post. You probably could change your blog post name into something else. Did you think about adding a new introduction? Anyway Great effort!
ReplyDeleteHi Milla I liked how you put on the first slide the background is galaxy and there is a cat and a puppy and there is also stars and maybe next time on slide three and slide four you can put the words bigger.
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ReplyDeletehay it Te mihaea and benaiah i liked the woll feing this part gave me a neel bolled are head off great ! i like how you mad the frie
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