Kia ora my name is Milla,
This is what I have been working on in class, We had a performance
yesterday on Tuesday and I was sadly not here :(
I also changed up the story.
I made this on google slides.
Kia ora Milla Great job on this i like it very much i like how you said your introduction and a great effort into this just a question how long did it take for you to do this?
Kia ora Milla, Riley here! this is very cool i thought it was kinda funny you bought me back when we had the show! but maybe next time i think you should add more writing in anyway very cool!
Kia ora Milla it is lucy from gilberthorpe school i loved the holed slide may be next time you can tell us a little more did you know that you did a relly great gob milla
Kia ora Milla it's me Bea, I like your blog it's amazing and maybe next time you could do part two so we can see more and we really like this so that's why i pick this one cause it's like my Brother's one and maybe you can put more letter in it so we can know about the kuia and the spider and i know we all ready know about the Kuia and the spider but I really like it! See you later~
kia ora this is THOMAS here like that show but i think i like yours better you put a lot o detall in it may be you shode put more detall like make the grand kids talk
Kia Ora Milla, This is amazing because I like how you do the kuia by using some shapes , I think you have tried really hard by making the kuia and it's so funny! Did you think about that you forgot to do the spider webs? I think it will be more interesting, Did you know that I love it so much and you did this by your own! I love it very much! BYE!!!
hi milla it benaiah here i liked the way you put the kuia and the grandkid you brought me back to when the people come in and did the show next time you could put more words bye
Kia Ora Milla, I really like the animation that you did. This reminded me of when the play came here. Maybe next time you could put an explanation of what is first. Still a great blog post. Blog you later.
Kia Ora Milla! I love thsi animation! It represents the funny elements of the proper story and makes for a hilarious story. I have nothing to say to help this apart from maybe adding capitals for the title page and a little decoration too, and it would be incredible. From Mikayla.
Kia Ora Kian here I like how you retold the story and changed it up a little bit.Maybe next time you could say what your next step is and add punctuation where it is supposed to go.
Kia ora Milla. I really like this animation because it shows what the Kuia and the Spider is all about. Everything is great but you could work on putting capital letters.
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Kia Ora Milla it is Lacie here.
ReplyDeleteI like your blog post about the Kuia and the Spider.
Maybe next time you could add more writing.
Kia ora Milla
ReplyDeleteGreat job on this i like it very much i like how you said your introduction and a great effort into this just a question how long did it take for you to do this?
Kia ora Milla, Riley here! this is very cool i thought it was kinda funny you bought me back when we had the show! but maybe next time i think you should add more writing in anyway very cool!
ReplyDeleteKia ora Milla it is lucy from gilberthorpe school i loved the holed slide
ReplyDeletemay be next time you can tell us a little more did you know that you did a relly great gob milla
kia ora Milla it is micah from gilberthorpe school i like your blog it is great work bye
ReplyDeleteKia ora Milla it's me Bea,
ReplyDeleteI like your blog it's amazing and maybe next time you could do part two so we can see more and we really like this so that's why i pick this one cause it's like my Brother's one and maybe you can put more letter in it so we can know about the kuia and the spider and i know we all ready know about the Kuia and the spider but I really like it!
See you later~
kia ora this is THOMAS here like that show but i think i like yours better you put a lot o detall in it may be you shode put more detall like make the grand kids talk
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Milla, This is amazing because I like how you do the kuia by using some shapes , I think you have tried really hard by making the kuia and it's so funny! Did you think about that you forgot to do the spider webs? I think it will be more interesting, Did you know that I love it so much and you did this by your own! I love it very much! BYE!!!
ReplyDeleteKia Ora, I did add the spider web but it didn't look like it was there.
DeleteHi it's Cody good story how did you make it next time make and ending to the story bye.
ReplyDeletehi milla it benaiah here
ReplyDeletei liked the way you put the kuia and the grandkid
you brought me back to when the people come in and did the show
next time you could put more words
bye
Kia Ora Milla,
ReplyDeleteI really like the animation that you did. This reminded me of when the play came here. Maybe next time you could put an explanation of what is first.
Still a great blog post.
Blog you later.
Kia Ora Milla!
ReplyDeleteI love thsi animation! It represents the funny elements of the proper story and makes for a hilarious story. I have nothing to say to help this apart from maybe adding capitals for the title page and a little decoration too, and it would be incredible.
From Mikayla.
Kia Ora Kian here I like how you retold the story and changed it up a little bit.Maybe next time you could say what your next step is and add punctuation where it is supposed to go.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Milla.
ReplyDeleteI really like this animation because it shows what the Kuia and the Spider is all about. Everything is great but you could work on putting capital letters.