Thursday, 29 March 2018
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Hi my name is James and I go to Karoro School.I like the colorful eggs you have put on the front of the page. at the end I like how you said that he had chocolate on his face.
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Joe and I go to Karoro School. I like the Easter eggs on the cover. I also like the story that you made. You need to add some more slides.
ReplyDeleteHi Milla its Dani. I love your roll a story of eater it's awesome. Just next time can you add more detail and more writing to make it look cool as. I hope this is a big help to you bye Milla.
ReplyDeleteHi Milla its Nevaeh here. I love your roll a story of eater it's fantastic. Just next time can you add more detail in your writing and more writing to make it look like a hole lot. I hope this help you a bit. Bye from Nevaeh
ReplyDeleteKia ora Milla, Zoey here from Whakamanawa!
ReplyDeleteI loved your story! It was super creative and you did a great job on saying some catchy things. Maybe next time you could use Punctuation because you weren't using full stops or putting in any pauses. And maybe you could not use that font because it always has capital letter. And you had way to many capital letters!
Blog U Later!
hi milla its me tyler i like your Easter slide but it would be more better with a few more slides
ReplyDeleteHi, Milla, it's Hunter here. I like the background of your slide a lot. This reminds me of when my cousins came over for easter. Some advice is to make a part 2. That's all from me BLOG YOU LATER!!!
ReplyDeleteHi it's me Addison wow you knocked me socks off it was a good story but maybe make your words a bit bigger and make more slides so we are hoked into it.
ReplyDeletebonjour Milla my name is Riley from te Ropu ngkaunui you are good at this but i could read the text you could mark the text bigrrg i would like some more text but when it fine well i had to go bye.
ReplyDeletehi milla i am linny from gilberthop school i love your roll easter story did you enjoy it i you think it was fun great job that really helps learn more about easter.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Latoiya Here from Te Ropu Whakamanawa. This Is marvelous But u Forgot something in ur writing A Full stops.Good Job You put a exclamation mark And capital letters.blog You Later.
ReplyDeleteHey Milla Its Kaycee here. i loved this because you are good at writing what you like it makes scene . did you know that you have been making lots of things that have been making me want to do them as well next time you should make the font bigger i could not really read it but it was ok blog you later
ReplyDeleteKia ora milla i like the way you put the estar story it was funny when the dad came in a the boy had chocolate all over his face but mabey you should put more into the story and what hapends next and put full stops you broght me back when this happend when i ate all my cholate and it wasint easter yet and i got in troble for eating my choclat easter bunny erlay
ReplyDeleteHey Milla Its Cayleigh here.
ReplyDeletemabe you can do more then you are and you can make the texts big so we can read it. Is a bit hade to read. did you think about it fiset or not? Why did you do this in the fiset plast you bring me back to when it was easter time.